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 I want my soul back
Going to Hell to claim it
You taught me the way
LobodeSanPedro
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Anonymous
19th Oct 2013 4:21pm
Powerful voice in there LSP, I like how it delivers in a small package.
Excellent work!
Anonymous
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19th Oct 2013 7:12pm
Thank for listening Vee.

LSP
LobodeSanPedro
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Anonymous
19th Oct 2013 5:04pm
Gulp!
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19th Oct 2013 7:14pm
You were scared? With a car like that lol

Gracias

LSP
LobodeSanPedro
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Anonymous
20th Oct 2013 1:15am
Merely imagined your itinerary.
Anonymous
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(Rose)
19th Oct 2013 6:03pm
Shudders. .
Lookawaynow
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19th Oct 2013 7:19pm
Flattered that you were moved.

LSP
LobodeSanPedro
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(RainC)
19th Oct 2013 9:25pm
*offers you a glass of ice water*
Give'em 'hell' while you're there! Xo
rain1courtel
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20th Oct 2013 8:32am
If I make it back.  Thanks for the read

LSP
LobodeSanPedro
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20th Oct 2013 3:29am
clever. ;)
WhatIUsedToBe
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20th Oct 2013 8:38am
Thank you for the read and feedback.

LSP
LobodeSanPedro
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(Miss Chi)
20th Oct 2013 3:07pm
Dark and haunting.
Fine senryu.
Chiyo
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