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Forgiven
The slap shook me like an earthquake on Maui
Was it the sting or burn that made me say Wowie?
Point taken; I can’t deny
Guilty, my plans went awry
Too late now what’s done is done
We can’t go back no need to run
To make amends; I’m driven
All I ask is that I’m FORGIVEN…
Was it the sting or burn that made me say Wowie?
Point taken; I can’t deny
Guilty, my plans went awry
Too late now what’s done is done
We can’t go back no need to run
To make amends; I’m driven
All I ask is that I’m FORGIVEN…
Published 18th Oct 2013
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18th Oct 2013 5:26pm
Yes. an even flow easy to read the message clear. good rhyming scheme, not contrived
18th Oct 2013 7:59pm
18th Oct 2013 5:37pm
You delivered this perfectly a read I enjoyed. Keep them coming and let your talent wow us all.
18th Oct 2013 8:00pm
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21st Oct 2013 1:39pm
I must agree. I love poems that relay the idea in the quickest, simplest manner. Thanks :-)
