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life lost
Demons from my past take flight chasing me threw the night
All across this broken land fallows fast a gastly hand
Breath long gone strength pulled up by a thread it's a wonder that your not dead broken lost can't brake free cursed shall you forever be so weak the thread but strong the pull keeping you hear in life so fullll
Full of pain full of strife lost you are so take up a knife try and cut the thread now red but soon come back alive not dead blooded yet hole the fragile thread holds you back holds you up no matter how full the over flowing cup so demon from my past brake free your all I have to comfort me.
All across this broken land fallows fast a gastly hand
Breath long gone strength pulled up by a thread it's a wonder that your not dead broken lost can't brake free cursed shall you forever be so weak the thread but strong the pull keeping you hear in life so fullll
Full of pain full of strife lost you are so take up a knife try and cut the thread now red but soon come back alive not dead blooded yet hole the fragile thread holds you back holds you up no matter how full the over flowing cup so demon from my past brake free your all I have to comfort me.
Published 18th Oct 2013
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21st Oct 2013 12:42pm
The story is dark n well expressed, just remember
to check ur work for typos ok? Nice work :)
to check ur work for typos ok? Nice work :)
21st Oct 2013 5:19pm
Sorry I type all of my work on my cell phone it atocorects everything and half the time messes it up a lot .but I'll try to keep an eye out for it. I'm more just trying to Get the idea down then make it perfect .also my cell is messed up so I can't go back and click on something to fix or change it because it will erase it all or paste and copy the rest of the line again.
