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she puts him down with...
you're there
amongst
my
favourite
poets...
and there
fore quite
out of
place...
Written by
dartford
(Paul S...)
Published 16th Oct 2013
| Edited 17th Oct 2013
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Re: she puts him down with...
17th Oct 2013 3:48am
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17th Oct 2013 5:47am
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17th Oct 2013 7:46pm
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Emphasis on RELUCTANTLY ...but still! :-)
Take it as a compliment since we all know how good you are (for us, too).
Take it as a compliment since we all know how good you are (for us, too).
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17th Oct 2013 10:34pm
I can't but help admire
a clever put down, even
if I am the recipient...but
your response is lovely...
I get far more here than
I give, Chi.....:)
a clever put down, even
if I am the recipient...but
your response is lovely...
I get far more here than
I give, Chi.....:)
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18th Oct 2013 7:45am
Re: she puts him down with...
17th Oct 2013 1:07pm
Ha...
a perverse sweetness
none
thee
less
a "left'handed compliment" is mo'inneresting than th'righteous, eh?... no?.... oh,sorry
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re: Re: she puts him down with...
17th Oct 2013 7:47pm
Re: she puts him down with...
who wants to run with the pack?
You have one of the most
unique voices on dup.
Revel in it, my friend.
You have one of the most
unique voices on dup.
Revel in it, my friend.
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re: Re: she puts him down with...
17th Oct 2013 7:50pm
Re: she puts him down with...
17th Oct 2013 2:52pm
Unfortunately--f o r h e r--true TALENT is not recognized!
My friend, you have an extraordinary gift...for those who are willing to receive it, it holds a
' p l a c e' of honor, to be sure! :) <3
My friend, you have an extraordinary gift...for those who are willing to receive it, it holds a
' p l a c e' of honor, to be sure! :) <3
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re: Re: she puts him down with...
17th Oct 2013 7:55pm
that was a lovely thing
to say, really do appreciate
it...I get the Enchantress bit,
now..:)
to say, really do appreciate
it...I get the Enchantress bit,
now..:)