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Drip drop drip
Today...
I put on my coat
Boots on my feet
I open my umbrella
And stroll down the street
The rain falls down
From the clouds above
Splashing in puddles
Is what I don't love
I put on my coat
Boots on my feet
I open my umbrella
And stroll down the street
The rain falls down
From the clouds above
Splashing in puddles
Is what I don't love
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Re: Drip drop drip
15th Oct 2013 9:49pm
So funny and nice write, Gabi...
I love :
'Splashing in puddles
'Is what I don't love
I love :
'Splashing in puddles
'Is what I don't love
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15th Oct 2013 9:52pm
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15th Oct 2013 10:10pm
Rainy all in Europe, I think... Except at Lisbon where I am since this evening, and the weather is warm and no rain!
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15th Oct 2013 10:19pm
Re: Drip drop drip
15th Oct 2013 11:47pm
Haha that's cute! I like it Gabi!
"The rain falls down
from the clouds above"
It sounds just like something I would write.
"The rain falls down
from the clouds above"
It sounds just like something I would write.
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16th Oct 2013 00:14am
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