hemophiliac

i enjoy the poem and it has a very good rhythm in it

You seem to have the quality to hold the attention of the reader tight, this one is a bit of a mystery, however, much enjoyed!!!

hmmm i could interpret this as possibly a really long metaphor for self mutilation or even possibly a lover that mentally abused you and this is the aftermath of that affliction.

i love how you took the title and added phrases like "hemorrhagic memories" and "arterial back spatter". clever word play. i could see the blood bath...

For a few poets, there is an intrinsic mystery in the language they use that is uniquely their own, an internal voice that quietly defies any set meaning for anyone who is not said poet. This is the poetry of specific moments that belong to you alone, this inner voice, & you will find few who "relate", maybe no one, but I think poets who create this way are singular. The words & ideas are connected, there is a "theme", a story, but this work is hauntingly hovering just beyond my reach. I like the slightly scientific touch, a somewhat understated blood-letting that makes me think. You are an artist that bears watching.

thank you.  I appreciate your thoughtful comment.