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Your ears
Under your hairs, a jewel disappears
Where I like when a sentence whispers
My love for you, your marvellous ears
Seeing them is stronger than elixirs
And can cancel my sadness with tears
Love to slide my tongue, then appears
Effect on all your body, I persevere!
Where I like when a sentence whispers
My love for you, your marvellous ears
Seeing them is stronger than elixirs
And can cancel my sadness with tears
Love to slide my tongue, then appears
Effect on all your body, I persevere!
Published 15th Oct 2013
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15th Oct 2013 1:43pm
15th Oct 2013 2:55pm
17th Oct 2013 11:34am
Funny but the first thing I ever notice about someone is their ears. It's never the eyes that catch my own but a persons ears. It seems more personal. I get the feeling you feel the same way from reading this.
17th Oct 2013 11:16pm
If you read my other poems, you could see that the first thing I catch for a person is his glance and his eyes, for a man as a woman. And if the eyes are deep and smart, I am interesting by this person. Ears are different, because for a woman, it is often a secret jewel, hidden by hair, and when I discover ears... it is a strange confusion for me, if I love the ears... A secret jewel, so nice and the way to whispering secret words!!!
Thank you so much for your nice comment, from_way!
Thank you so much for your nice comment, from_way!
