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The perfect night
There were stars in the sky
A fire in the hearth
The grass had a slight coat of dew
I looked across
The flickering see of red
And saw your face
As our eyes met
You gave me a smile
A smile that went from your heart
All the way to your eyes
It warmed me to my soul
And as i smiled back
I felt the extint
Of our love
One that can pass through time
Without being broke
One that will last through
101 fights
This has been
The perfect night
A fire in the hearth
The grass had a slight coat of dew
I looked across
The flickering see of red
And saw your face
As our eyes met
You gave me a smile
A smile that went from your heart
All the way to your eyes
It warmed me to my soul
And as i smiled back
I felt the extint
Of our love
One that can pass through time
Without being broke
One that will last through
101 fights
This has been
The perfect night
Published 15th Oct 2013
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15th Oct 2013 7:05am
Very reminiscing. Lovely, I felt like I was entering the poetic side of Gatsby. :).
7th Nov 2013 11:17am
