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I Miss You
I Still Love You
You're so..
so very close,
that your very breath
I can hear.
But being this close,
is still too far,
the painful remaining emotions,
is so hard to bear!
You may never know,
never hear,
never see,
How your love,
your actions,
words,
affected me.
You gave me the most,
unbearable pain
a young girl could ever
experience.
The aches of all torture.
A broken heart,
without lenience.
Yet, I find myself still loving you.
We talk,
and though I said,
let's be friends.
I can't lie and say,
it doesn't hurt,
this closeness isn't enough
but that's our agreement.
Though I may be blinded,
and still act out
in sudden burst of emotions.
It's only you,
only you,
you're the cause of this
intoxication.
because, I find myself, still loving you
Even though,
many nights of sleep
are filled with thoughts of
'what if's'
I still love you.
I will always do.
And I've never regret it.
But please,
for the life of me,
don't be too kind.
I might misunderstand your
kindness for that love,
that love which isn't anymore,
and has been for a long time.
Though I wish we'd go back the same,
Thinking about it, I'm actually pretty
screwed.
Because sometimes I can still hear your
voice call my name.
That just proves to me, that I'm still
in love with ...
You
You're so..
so very close,
that your very breath
I can hear.
But being this close,
is still too far,
the painful remaining emotions,
is so hard to bear!
You may never know,
never hear,
never see,
How your love,
your actions,
words,
affected me.
You gave me the most,
unbearable pain
a young girl could ever
experience.
The aches of all torture.
A broken heart,
without lenience.
Yet, I find myself still loving you.
We talk,
and though I said,
let's be friends.
I can't lie and say,
it doesn't hurt,
this closeness isn't enough
but that's our agreement.
Though I may be blinded,
and still act out
in sudden burst of emotions.
It's only you,
only you,
you're the cause of this
intoxication.
because, I find myself, still loving you
Even though,
many nights of sleep
are filled with thoughts of
'what if's'
I still love you.
I will always do.
And I've never regret it.
But please,
for the life of me,
don't be too kind.
I might misunderstand your
kindness for that love,
that love which isn't anymore,
and has been for a long time.
Though I wish we'd go back the same,
Thinking about it, I'm actually pretty
screwed.
Because sometimes I can still hear your
voice call my name.
That just proves to me, that I'm still
in love with ...
You
Published 12th Oct 2013
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12th Oct 2013 6:22pm
deeply affecting poem, feeling
like that is so hard...a very
emotional and well expressed
piece of writing, Darker
like that is so hard...a very
emotional and well expressed
piece of writing, Darker
12th Oct 2013 9:05pm
12th Oct 2013 6:51pm
12th Oct 2013 9:07pm
wow... never considered that my writing was flawless, just the opposite actually.
Thank you for that Hades!
I'm happy you liked this Write
Thank you for that Hades!
I'm happy you liked this Write
12th Oct 2013 10:27pm
Dam, I know the feeling ,here I was going to give you some great advice and compliment,but realizing I'm stuck in the same place as you are :/ Oh well Beautiful write.
12th Oct 2013 11:36pm
We've all been there... or in my case... still am.
Thank You RedBaron
I'm happy you liked this write
Thank You RedBaron
I'm happy you liked this write
14th Oct 2013 1:07am
Yup. Sorry, I don't have anything brilliant. Unreciprocated love kicked my ass like a bad time machine, almost 2 years gone.
14th Oct 2013 2:06am
No prob.
A like this isn't just for me to get it of my chest, but also for those who are feeling this same.
Something they can relate to, so that they don't feel as if their the only one feeling like this
A like this isn't just for me to get it of my chest, but also for those who are feeling this same.
Something they can relate to, so that they don't feel as if their the only one feeling like this
