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Je me souviens
I have known you in a autumn day
When everything seemed deserted
Grass was withered and
The trees without leafs and
Birds flew in warmer places
Je me souviens...
I fell in love with you
You were like the sun
So splendid so bright
Which gently floated in the sky
I was the cold blue sea and
I asked for a ray love
To warm my soul
And keep me strong
Je me souviens...
I asked just for a sweet word
To have power to go on
I asked just for a kiss
To be always without fears
I asked for a tight hug
To keep in my memory
All i lived and i got
But you gave me more than that
The most happiest life
When everything seemed deserted
Grass was withered and
The trees without leafs and
Birds flew in warmer places
Je me souviens...
I fell in love with you
You were like the sun
So splendid so bright
Which gently floated in the sky
I was the cold blue sea and
I asked for a ray love
To warm my soul
And keep me strong
Je me souviens...
I asked just for a sweet word
To have power to go on
I asked just for a kiss
To be always without fears
I asked for a tight hug
To keep in my memory
All i lived and i got
But you gave me more than that
The most happiest life
Published 12th Oct 2013
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- Edited 16th Sep 2018 4:45pm
12th Oct 2013 5:26pm
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13th Oct 2013 00:17am
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12th Oct 2013 10:18pm
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13th Oct 2013 00:14am
Thank you,Sansaint:)Your comment makes me very happy,you put a big smile on my face:)
In this poem I put my true feelings,i am very glad you liked:)
In this poem I put my true feelings,i am very glad you liked:)
13th Oct 2013 1:25am
I love :
"But you gave me more than that
The most happiest life"
And all the poem, so heartfelt, so wonderful.
Nice write, Gabi, and "je me souviens aussi"
"But you gave me more than that
The most happiest life"
And all the poem, so heartfelt, so wonderful.
Nice write, Gabi, and "je me souviens aussi"
13th Oct 2013 11:34am
'I fell in love with you
You were like the sun
So splendid so bright
Which gently floated in the sky
I was the cold blue sea and
I asked for a ray love
To warm my soul
And keep me strong'
nice metaphors used in the above lines ..
the sun n sea comforting each other with warm love n then comparing their relationship with yours...
very interesting keep on penning my friend ..
u are blessed with a gift..
cyanide...
You were like the sun
So splendid so bright
Which gently floated in the sky
I was the cold blue sea and
I asked for a ray love
To warm my soul
And keep me strong'
nice metaphors used in the above lines ..
the sun n sea comforting each other with warm love n then comparing their relationship with yours...
very interesting keep on penning my friend ..
u are blessed with a gift..
cyanide...
15th Oct 2013 1:47pm
