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Morning Seed
Morning Seed (haiku)
catkins are baptized
anemophilous nectar
coats the soulless day
catkins are baptized
anemophilous nectar
coats the soulless day
Published 10th Oct 2013
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10th Oct 2013 4:42am
Learned a few new words in this short piece. Excellent 5-7-5 form. I can hear your words on the wind. A quiet amazement. Great haiku.
10th Oct 2013 11:22am
Thanks for the read and feedback ... I love using haiku when I want to write something short and tight. It keeps me disciplined.
LSP
LSP
Anonymous
11th Oct 2013 2:05am
Not only the correct form, but the perfect meditative feel of a masterful haiku. Loved this.
11th Oct 2013 3:56am
11th Oct 2013 9:59pm
What soul-ish Haiku.
It made me think of honey (maybe it has something to do with the word 'Nectar')
Very Bautiful Haiku!!
Darker
It made me think of honey (maybe it has something to do with the word 'Nectar')
Very Bautiful Haiku!!
Darker
12th Oct 2013 3:17am
Hey Darker - thanks for stopping by and the read ... Much appreciated. I love working with this form.
LSP
LSP
13th Oct 2013 11:29am
vocab +2. the homework was worth it. succinct to a fine point.
i actually looked for a dictionary for a second before i remembered there's a website. that should tell you how long it's been since i've had to look up a word
i actually looked for a dictionary for a second before i remembered there's a website. that should tell you how long it's been since i've had to look up a word
13th Oct 2013 11:41am
Thanks for the read and feedback ... there are so many great wordsmiths here on this sight and I just humbly take my cues from them by constantly trying to rework the ordinary ...
LSP
LSP
