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Little by Little
It's still a little way off
As events twist and turn
In this simmering pot of
Fateful journeys and resting
Places.
It's still a little way off
Our hearts becoming fine
Tuned as we rehearse songs
Of feelings returning in from
The cold into the warm arms
Of a true loves embrace.
It's still a little way off
As we understand patience
A little more each day with
Teaching kisses and creative
Snuggles to quench undesired
Impatient thoughts
It's still a little way off
But time never stands still
And thats a good thing x
As events twist and turn
In this simmering pot of
Fateful journeys and resting
Places.
It's still a little way off
Our hearts becoming fine
Tuned as we rehearse songs
Of feelings returning in from
The cold into the warm arms
Of a true loves embrace.
It's still a little way off
As we understand patience
A little more each day with
Teaching kisses and creative
Snuggles to quench undesired
Impatient thoughts
It's still a little way off
But time never stands still
And thats a good thing x
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Re: Little by Little
9th Oct 2013 7:20am
Very sweet Rose
Reminds me to be patient in waiting to see my Master....thankyou :)
Reminds me to be patient in waiting to see my Master....thankyou :)
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9th Oct 2013 7:27am
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9th Oct 2013 8:47am
Seems to work well when placed alongside the Robert Plant song by the same name. Terrific write.
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9th Oct 2013 9:15am
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9th Oct 2013 10:08am
Rose this is just beautiful. I love it and the final stanza just such a spellbinder. Lovely. Syn
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9th Oct 2013 2:22pm
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Anonymous
9th Oct 2013 3:48pm
Oh that's beautiful, so heartfelt and tender..yes everything little by little..Rose you're such a romantic!
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9th Oct 2013 3:53pm
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Anonymous
9th Oct 2013 6:20pm
I love how you do this Little by Little. It's so gentle.
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9th Oct 2013 6:30pm
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Anonymous
11th Oct 2013 00:59am
I read your poems every day as a reminder to myself. Keep them coming...
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