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Release
Chipping away the walls
I built
Releasing guilt
Of moments unchangeable
Opening
Awaking
Beginning
Renewing
Growing
An open clean pure heart
The one I had from the start
That became harden
Harden from pain
The one day I pray would disappear
That defining moment
When who I was-was forever altered
But I am new
Changed
A new creation
All things old are no more
I can no longer hold this
Today I forgive
I forgive myself
Which seems to be the hardest person in the world to forgive
I built
Releasing guilt
Of moments unchangeable
Opening
Awaking
Beginning
Renewing
Growing
An open clean pure heart
The one I had from the start
That became harden
Harden from pain
The one day I pray would disappear
That defining moment
When who I was-was forever altered
But I am new
Changed
A new creation
All things old are no more
I can no longer hold this
Today I forgive
I forgive myself
Which seems to be the hardest person in the world to forgive
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Re: Release
8th Oct 2013 10:59pm
"Today I forgive
I forgive myself
Which seems to be the hardest person in the world to forgive"<--So true!
Release! Release it all! Great to see some new ink, Grace~...Xo
I forgive myself
Which seems to be the hardest person in the world to forgive"<--So true!
Release! Release it all! Great to see some new ink, Grace~...Xo
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re: Re: Release
9th Oct 2013 3:52pm
Thank you for always taking the time to comment on my writings Rain. Much appreciated
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Re: Release
9th Oct 2013 5:17am
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Re: Release
9th Oct 2013 3:51pm
I feel that way too. It is so hard to forgive myself. Good write on release!
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9th Oct 2013 3:55pm
Thank you, I love when someone can relate, appreciate the read & comment Radiance.
Re: Release
25th Apr 2014 9:43pm
Truer words have never been spoken. The hardest person to forgive is yourself. I agree. Good one.
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29th Apr 2014 4:22am
Re. Release
21st Oct 2015 8:47am
feeling the pressure of walls is like binds on your personality. escaping the house will help you feel human. but returning will help you feel loved. :) in other words your poem totally made a random guy smile. the physical aspect of things will never rival the philosophical aspect of physical things ;)
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