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Tree (Haiku)

I am like a tree
� with its hard exterior,
� �cold, I stand alone.

Written by RedBaron

(Baron)

Published 8th Oct 2013

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Re: Tree (Haiku)

8th Oct 2013 6:39pm

I love haikus. Short and simple yet powerful. Question though... Does this tree want a forest around him or does he prefer being alone?

Great poem.

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Re: Tree (Haiku)

8th Oct 2013 7:27pm

For now he just wants to be alone,
Thanks for the read.

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Re: Tree (Haiku)

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8th Oct 2013 11:13pm

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9th Oct 2013 00:39am

Thanks Gabriel, glad you liked it

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