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Trial and Error
I have tried to die.
I have tried to leave.
I have tried to stop.
I have tried to end.
I have tried to jump.
I have tried life.
I have tried help.
I have tried hospital.
I have tried therapy.
I have tried medication.
And now I am tired.
© 2013 Charlie
I have tried to leave.
I have tried to stop.
I have tried to end.
I have tried to jump.
I have tried life.
I have tried help.
I have tried hospital.
I have tried therapy.
I have tried medication.
And now I am tired.
© 2013 Charlie
Published 7th Oct 2013
| Edited 22nd Nov 2013
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7th Oct 2013 9:09am
An interesting and successful piece enforced by the monotony of repeating I have tried. The title is well suited. I enjoyed this piece.
My philosophy I always follow is if you fall down get up and dust those knees. Good luck. Look after yourself. Syn
My philosophy I always follow is if you fall down get up and dust those knees. Good luck. Look after yourself. Syn
23rd Oct 2013 10:58pm
