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A reason.
19th march 2012:
Was my friend’s birthday
We had conversations,disturbing
I came back pretty badly drunk
Had a hangover worst,
Made me wipe out my poems
At the same time
Gap-ly,
she and me shared hitting words
I couldn’t convey the
Reason,she wasn’t for my leaving here
I wanted her words.
Found hanging & repairing hers
If I could rush directly to her,
But I couldn’t,
rather replayed the carcassed silence
in half-corners!
what made you come to Delhi?(if at all that was you)
(i respect that)
and your face, a poor hybrid
Of angst.
Now..
I’m living in me.
Was my friend’s birthday
We had conversations,disturbing
I came back pretty badly drunk
Had a hangover worst,
Made me wipe out my poems
At the same time
Gap-ly,
she and me shared hitting words
I couldn’t convey the
Reason,she wasn’t for my leaving here
I wanted her words.
Found hanging & repairing hers
If I could rush directly to her,
But I couldn’t,
rather replayed the carcassed silence
in half-corners!
what made you come to Delhi?(if at all that was you)
(i respect that)
and your face, a poor hybrid
Of angst.
Now..
I’m living in me.
Published 6th Oct 2013
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6th Oct 2013 2:45pm
"she and me shared hitting words" - love that line. wish it was mine. keep them coming.
Anonymous
6th Oct 2013 5:45pm
I like the erratic structure of this poem, the drunk theme fits in even there. Regret is a bastard, and it comes across well here.
Thanky ou for the read.
Thanky ou for the read.
Anonymous
6th Oct 2013 7:02pm
I do like this Rakhi, unlike your usual style of poetry, this in its simplistic but erratic structure gives a nice glimpse of your range in writing.
11th Oct 2013 8:39pm
The title seems to fit so well with the last line. Short in length and yet conveying oh so much.
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