Elsewhere

not a bad little journey you've got here.

Thank you for visiting, Utma, and the comment.

:)

This ones something special tic tac, I'm sure she would love it :) it's one of those very rare poems that is relatable for almost everyone.

Cheers, Dys, glad you think so!

Thanks

very nice. the last 6 lines are my favorite..

Yeah, those were tricky, so I'm pleased you like them, zenfool. Thanks for the visit!

Beautiful tribute for Magdalena, she's gone but not forgotten, leaving us just a little thirsty, remembering the taste of her words.

Exactly that, Vee.

Thank you!

Awesome, the mirage of permanence.  Very nice tribute!

Insightful as always, Mike, thank you.

Indeed...mist
Wonderful Write Atakti!!!

Thank you, Soul!

oohhh..I loved the almost abrupt end that made the entire write land with a power..a strong, yet soft truth.
This is well written, Atakti..and woven full of emotional pondering  
well done
thank's, Miki

Thank you for the generous comments, Miki!

:)

Yes, my updates, reading list and keyboard are a little drier. I miss her unwavering support and seductive words.

The poem made me think of hanging by a pool in the summer sun, dousing warm skin in the cool refreshing water... those last stanzas had quite an impact.

Fantastic tribute to Magdalena. All the best in the comp.

Keyboard?? TMI...

:P

Thanks, Case, man. I don't care about the comp, just hope Magdalena sees our words and knows she's missed.

Thank you, sweet Gabriel...

:)

Atakti,

When I had read your poem I felt the water being a metaphor to a well hidden deep which clarifies and captures things, a womb and a soothing stream
I guess when I think about it, it suits to Magdalenas work, great tribute!

Glad you think it is apt. Thank you, Mourganna!

Short but beautifull poem

Many thanks for the comment.

I like the way you depict a feeling, it makes me visualize it...I really like your work!
I can honestly say that you are one of my favorite poets in this jungle