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Pen and Paper Seduction
I. Pen-sex, baby?
midnight rush,
in bed--
with a pen
in my hand
and you--
in my mind...
my pen scribbles
my imagination wanders
my body shivers
to the thought of you,
on top of me--
jotting kisses
scrawling caresses
thrusting verses
pounding,
deep and sharp
series of orgasms--
inside of my head...
II. Paper Lust
this piece of paper
reminds me of your bed;
white, pristine, uninviting
my naked body
when sprawled across the sheets
just like my usual pen scrawling
in it's filthy beat
fueled by this unforgiving heat--
beautiful in its indecency...
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11th Jan 2011 2:00pm
I thought the mix of literature and sex was conducted so gracefully. Some of the comparatives were so easy to read.
'jotting kisses
scrawling caresses
thrusting verses'
I liked how the first two had the writing first and the second had the written comparison last as if it were finishing off. Wonderful work. Well done.
'jotting kisses
scrawling caresses
thrusting verses'
I liked how the first two had the writing first and the second had the written comparison last as if it were finishing off. Wonderful work. Well done.
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11th Jan 2011 2:38pm
that's
11th Jan 2011 2:19pm
bloody fantastic lit-erotica.
"just like my usual pen scrawling
in it's filthy beat"
dunno why that's so tantalizing, but it is. you write the right things, doll. i know where you're coming from. [:
"just like my usual pen scrawling
in it's filthy beat"
dunno why that's so tantalizing, but it is. you write the right things, doll. i know where you're coming from. [:
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re: that's
thanks, doll! I'm sure you know where I'm coming from, as it reflects through your recent writings, crazy-sexy-lovely... :)
This is...
11th Jan 2011 11:32pm
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12th Jan 2011 8:34am
well done
13th Jan 2011 10:04am
re: well done
13th Jan 2011 10:41am
ur WONDERFUL
Anonymous
15th Jan 2011 10:13pm
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Yes, this is fantastic
Anonymous
7th Feb 2011 10:11pm
It's classily composed and - while being about sex, remains sexy and not just depraved imagery for shock value's sake.
Well written,
S
Well written,
S
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re: Yes, this is fantastic
8th Feb 2011 2:04am