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Tainted dream
I admit I've fallen prey
to it's device, and
here's my
secret...
I am no longer willing
to fight.
The other angels have have
lost their grip on me.
Lets carry on
differently for
you and I are like
day and night, and
life is nothing more
than a tainted dream.
I just hope that when
I awake, you'll tell
me that you're still
in love with me.
to it's device, and
here's my
secret...
I am no longer willing
to fight.
The other angels have have
lost their grip on me.
Lets carry on
differently for
you and I are like
day and night, and
life is nothing more
than a tainted dream.
I just hope that when
I awake, you'll tell
me that you're still
in love with me.
Published 30th Sep 2013
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1st Oct 2013 5:40am
I like that there are 'other' angels, implying there's one present. A bittersweet dream...
1st Oct 2013 9:24pm
"Lets carry on
differently for
you and I are like
day and night, and
life is nothing more
than a tainted dream. "
Interesting line...wonder if the dream is only deferred?
differently for
you and I are like
day and night, and
life is nothing more
than a tainted dream. "
Interesting line...wonder if the dream is only deferred?
