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Daddy's little Monster
You taught me to stand up for myself
To lie
To rebel
...If necessary
You told me that life is a game
To NEVER let ANYONE play it on my behalf
And, like a good little girl that I am,
I paid attention to your teachings
BUT what I fail to understand is
Why you have a problem with me practising
What you preached
To lie
To rebel
...If necessary
You told me that life is a game
To NEVER let ANYONE play it on my behalf
And, like a good little girl that I am,
I paid attention to your teachings
BUT what I fail to understand is
Why you have a problem with me practising
What you preached
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28th Sep 2013 10:28pm
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28th Sep 2013 10:52pm
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Anonymous
28th Sep 2013 10:38pm
Good question Cinth, seems to be the case most often. you inked it well.
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re: Re: Daddy's little Monster
29th Sep 2013 11:58am
Haha,I guess it's not so nice when everything comes back to nip him on the butt. Thank you,Gabriel xo
Re: Daddy's little Monster
Anonymous
29th Sep 2013 00:07am
Good poem about bad parenting...do what I say, not what I do.....
Good read
Peace
Kitty
Good read
Peace
Kitty
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Re: Daddy's little Monster
29th Sep 2013 2:57am
Who's, ominous sounding! Hope u don't hurt me sweetness, I'm fragile! lol... Loved your in your face ink
N yea I'm positive you can be one badass if u want to be :)
N yea I'm positive you can be one badass if u want to be :)
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Anonymous
29th Sep 2013 4:32am
Great scribe Cinth! great question!
why? yes, but why? lol
why? yes, but why? lol
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29th Sep 2013 12:03pm
Re: Daddy's little Monster
18th Oct 2013 5:22pm
Very powerful piece, as being a father I understand on life you have to pray for the best and allow your kids to gfoe into their own. Love the ink!
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