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"Issues"
Swift rush
takes my breath
How many issues
until my death?
Needle sharp
I register red
I feel you swirling
in my head
I cannot walk
Drop to my knees
My heartbeat stalls
Help me, please!
I pushed the limit
I did too much
Is it worth dying
for another rush?
Body spasms
Feeling death's kiss
God, don't let them
find me like this!
takes my breath
How many issues
until my death?
Needle sharp
I register red
I feel you swirling
in my head
I cannot walk
Drop to my knees
My heartbeat stalls
Help me, please!
I pushed the limit
I did too much
Is it worth dying
for another rush?
Body spasms
Feeling death's kiss
God, don't let them
find me like this!
Published 28th Sep 2013
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28th Sep 2013 6:28pm
28th Sep 2013 11:59pm
Thankyou sooo much! I'm excited as hell that I've gotten that many reads already. This is way cool.
2nd Oct 2013 3:29am
You deserve it , it's easily the best poem I've read since I've been on this site!!
1st Oct 2013 7:03am
6th Dec 2013 10:39pm
Hits home. What great work. I admire your honesty and motivation to write something that so many others wish they could say. Sweet write hon.
7th Dec 2013 11:06pm
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