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"Confused" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 26/9/2005

Girls These Days ...  
Are So ... Confused ... ???  

They Seem To Be ...
In ... " Alices' Shoes " ... !?!  
 
YES ... " Wonderland " ... ?!?  
 
Well ....  
I'll Be ... DAMNED ... !!!  
Before I Fall .........................................
 
Into The Hands ...  
of A Girl Whose Life's A ...  
 
........ " Sham" .......  
 
Saying ... One Thing ...  
But Doing ... Another ... ?!?  
 
RUSHING Home ...  
To Watch ... "Big Brother" ... !!!!!  
 
Girls Like THESE ... !!!  
Should NOT BE ... Mothers ... !!!  
 
Because Their Child ...  
Will Surely ... SUFFER ... !!!!!  
 
Suffer FROM .............................  
Her ... " Confusion " ... ?!?  
 
Come On Girls ...  
I'm ... NOT The One ... !!!!!  
 
Mess With Me ...  
And You'll Be ...  
 
... " STUNNED " ... !!!!!  
 
NOT With ... Violence ...  
Or A .... " Gun " .... !!! ....  
 
But With ... "THIS" ...  
 
Simple ... " Wisdom " ...  
 
WAKEY WAKEY ... !!!  
 
"Rise and shine" ...  
Face The World ...  
and Do What's Right ... !!!  
 
DON'T Get ... "Trapped" ...  
In ..... "Your Mirage" ..... !!!!  
 
Or ... A World ....  
of ... " Tarot Cards " ...  
 
See Yourself ...  
For Who ... YOU ARE ... !!!  
 
Don't Do Things ...  
That You'll ... REGRET ... !!!  
Like ... JUMPING IN ...  
A ... STRANGERS Bed ... !!!!!  
  
Make ... A STAND ...  
And ... STICK TO IT ... !!!!!  
 
Instead of S P R E A D I N G ...  
THOSE ... WET LIPS ... !!!!!  
 
DON'T ... Get VEX ... !!!  
or ... Get UPSET ....  
Because ... " CONFUSION " ...  
RULED .... Your Head .... !?!  
 
"Yeah, but you,  
were making moves !!!"

 
"So were you, which goes to prove,  
you were wanting me to woo !
Come on now, did I force you,
to come and sleep, in my bedroom ?"

 
"No, but now I feel abused !  
We moved to fast !
I've thought it through,  
and don't think that,  
I'm right for you !!!"

 
"Okay, that's cool,  
but, let me prove  
something to you,  
we kissed and stuff,  
and then we hugged,  
but, when I said,  
we should get up  
you put me in,  
a tight armlock ?
Now you're saying,  
you wanted to TALK ?!?  
It seems you have  
some things to sort  
inside your mind.  
Take that walk  
I'll give you time,  
but, don't complain  
if I refrain, from letting you,  
confuse my brain !  
Figure out, what it is you need,  
then come back, and talk to me.  
Otherwise, let's both be free,  
to be with, who we want to be !  
But, don't be playing, games with me  
My name's Big Virge, not Monopoly !"  
Life to me, is not a dream  
Talk is cheap, but actions speak.  
So, stop your talk, and walk the walk !  
Don't kiss me, on our first date !  
and change your mind, the very next day ?"  
Come on now,  give me a break !  
Such confusion breeds delusion,  
and a premature conclusion !"
 
 
"I don't know you, you don't know me !  
You may be right, but let's wait and see.  
Let's take some time,  the date went fine !  
It's not my fault, you crossed the line !  
What can I say, i'm a sexy guy !  
Who'll give you lows, as well as HIGHS !  
Every couple has their troubles !  
and sometimes, yes,  fall down and stumble,  
but, getting up,  is part of the fun,  
and helps reduce our confusion"

 
"Opposites attract, like, white and black  
I suggest, you remember that !"

 
"But, firstly you must face the facts,
about the things you sometimes do,  
Then I can, make love to you !"

 
Those Are Words ...  
On Which To ... CHEW ...  
 
Take Some Time ...  
And ... THINK It Through ...  
And Then You Won't Be ...  
 
So ....  
 
...  " Confused " ... ?!?
Written by BigVirge (Big Virge)
Published | Edited 28th Nov 2019
Author's Note
Written about a woman, who was also a poet !

So, maybe the confusion came from that factor, as much as anything else !

However, this was written with a smile on my face, when I thought of the CRAZINESS that happened within days of us engaging in let's say, intimacies .... !!!!!
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