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yours forever
Seduce my mind
Undress my conscience
Trail kisses across my heart
Caress my soul
Make love to my spirit
And I will be yours forever
. . .
I pinky promise
Undress my conscience
Trail kisses across my heart
Caress my soul
Make love to my spirit
And I will be yours forever
. . .
I pinky promise
Published 25th Sep 2013
| Edited 27th Sep 2013
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Anonymous
25th Sep 2013 2:22pm
Nice! Short, but everything that needs to be expressed.. Excellent scribe my friend :) xo
26th Sep 2013 8:25am
25th Sep 2013 2:39pm
WOW...agree with npik, it does indeed say all that's needed to be said in like the best possible way it can!...outstanding ink...
26th Sep 2013 8:26am
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25th Sep 2013 3:44pm
It's this kind of love that stays steadfast no matter what.
Lovely, short poem :)
Lovely, short poem :)
26th Sep 2013 8:31am
25th Sep 2013 9:05pm
So sweet and passionate, just shows one doesn't need a lot to be expressive, very nicely done Cinth :)
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Anonymous
27th Sep 2013 1:29am
What a romantic you are
I hope you get the love you seek
A good write
Write on!
Kitty
I hope you get the love you seek
A good write
Write on!
Kitty
27th Sep 2013 2:37am
Sadly this is the only romantic scribe I've ever written :( hehe,but thank you for gracing me with your presence,Kitty (:
11th Oct 2013 5:41am
wow a very well written poem ...beautiful like you n your thoughts...
great use of metaphors on the first two lines ..liked it a lot ...
keep up the good work..
cyanide...
great use of metaphors on the first two lines ..liked it a lot ...
keep up the good work..
cyanide...
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2nd Jan 2014 3:39pm
Short and simple.
Beautifully penned each word packs its own punch.
indeed, the best thing in this world is finding someone who wishes about getting inside your mind instead of your body,
~ xx
Beautifully penned each word packs its own punch.
indeed, the best thing in this world is finding someone who wishes about getting inside your mind instead of your body,
~ xx
