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A Young Single Moms Pregnancy
Packing her bag and leaving for school
Three months pregnant she feels like a fool
Nobody knows but she's starting to show
Soon everyone is going to know
Not knowing what do she packs her bags once more
She drops all of her hopes and dreams
And behind her she walks out the door
Wow nothing is easy as she wishes it seems
Leaving her family and friends behind
She goes to try and find a job
After so many times of getting declined
Her head starts to throb
Thinking of all the fears
Of raising a child all on her own
Her main ones are how to support him/her for a whole 18 years
And of course being all alone
Finally she gets a Job to support her child
Six months later she gives birth to a beautiful baby boy
Oh how her heart melted when he finally smiled
Her heart was filled with all the world's joy
Three months pregnant she feels like a fool
Nobody knows but she's starting to show
Soon everyone is going to know
Not knowing what do she packs her bags once more
She drops all of her hopes and dreams
And behind her she walks out the door
Wow nothing is easy as she wishes it seems
Leaving her family and friends behind
She goes to try and find a job
After so many times of getting declined
Her head starts to throb
Thinking of all the fears
Of raising a child all on her own
Her main ones are how to support him/her for a whole 18 years
And of course being all alone
Finally she gets a Job to support her child
Six months later she gives birth to a beautiful baby boy
Oh how her heart melted when he finally smiled
Her heart was filled with all the world's joy
Published 24th Sep 2013
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25th Sep 2013 00:32am
25th Sep 2013 00:37am
25th Sep 2013 3:29am
It's scary to be a mom even with help, let alone, alone. It's precious though to watch them grow :)
I agree, Beautiful
I agree, Beautiful
Anonymous
25th Sep 2013 2:16pm
I like it! You made me think about the dilemma many young girls have to deal with. Made me think about the options available to them, their responsibilities if they keep a baby, the loss of so much of life they won't experience and thoughts of how a child can enrich your life.
You could use some help to polish it up with grammar and punctuation but over all it's a great job with a difficult situation and maybe
it'll give the young girls behind you something to think about. :)
You could use some help to polish it up with grammar and punctuation but over all it's a great job with a difficult situation and maybe
it'll give the young girls behind you something to think about. :)
26th Sep 2013 5:03am
27th Sep 2013 1:13pm
it is hard but I think you will do well and you will have a good life and you will be a good mum
