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I LOVE the FALL
Cold crept in quietly
wrapping around me
like a kept promise
leaping into my
lovers arms like a
warm sweater
reminding me why
I LOVE the FALL
wrapping around me
like a kept promise
leaping into my
lovers arms like a
warm sweater
reminding me why
I LOVE the FALL
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Re: I LOVE the FALL
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2013 7:58pm
warming without the falling leaves tl
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re: Re: I LOVE the FALL
25th Sep 2013 2:09pm
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25th Sep 2013 2:09pm
Re: I LOVE the FALL
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2013 8:36pm
Very beautiful poem - I love that line "wrapping around me like a kept promise." It has just started to cool down where I'm from. I love the fall too!

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25th Sep 2013 2:11pm
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23rd Sep 2013 8:54pm
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25th Sep 2013 2:11pm
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23rd Sep 2013 10:43pm
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24th Sep 2013 00:36am
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Re: I LOVE the FALL
Anonymous
24th Sep 2013 4:12am
This passage is great:
"Cold crept in quietly
wrapping around me
like a kept promise"
I wish cold would wrap around me, unfortunately in Texas that doesn't come until, maybe, late November.
I love your nature pieces.
"Cold crept in quietly
wrapping around me
like a kept promise"
I wish cold would wrap around me, unfortunately in Texas that doesn't come until, maybe, late November.
I love your nature pieces.

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25th Sep 2013 2:13pm
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25th Sep 2013 2:14pm