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MIRROR MIRROR
Mirror Mirror on the wall,
Who's the biggest fool of them all?
Is it the girl who can't stop crying?
Or the one who won't stop TRYING??
Who's the biggest fool of them all?
Is it the girl who can't stop crying?
Or the one who won't stop TRYING??
Published 6th Jan 2011
| Edited 28th Jan 2011
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12th Jan 2011 7:55pm
again i love this i love rhyme and you do it well here i like the way you emphasise the word TRYING i love the shortness of this prose 27 words thats all as they say less is more well done
28th Jan 2011 1:51am
29th Mar 2011 11:40pm
