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Kukri
Long smooth strokes
The masters move
Guiding and honing
She submits to his stone
Every inch his desire
And labored pains secure
She surrenders to his toil
To perfect his legacy
Flawless and complete
She is kukri
And must draw blood
Before she is sheathed.
The masters move
Guiding and honing
She submits to his stone
Every inch his desire
And labored pains secure
She surrenders to his toil
To perfect his legacy
Flawless and complete
She is kukri
And must draw blood
Before she is sheathed.
Published 23rd Sep 2013
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umm, was this suppose to be sexy, hawkdude?
Because knives, labored pains and drawing blood don't seem to be sensual. Can I buy a vowel? Maybe it will help me understand.....
Hugs! :) xo
Because knives, labored pains and drawing blood don't seem to be sensual. Can I buy a vowel? Maybe it will help me understand.....
Hugs! :) xo
23rd Sep 2013 8:12pm
The creation of her is sensual for the master, miss. Her intended purpose.....maybe not so much.
23rd Sep 2013 4:45pm
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24th Sep 2013 9:59am
24th Sep 2013 3:09pm
Anonymous
24th Sep 2013 2:15am
Wonderfully written - sensual steel...
24th Sep 2013 3:23pm
