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The Rest
We are our worlds
Wrapped in skin and cellophane
Decorated cakes rising and falling,
Smoking candy cigarettes
In the crematorium.
But the words we choose
Are like surgical instruments
Picking, placing and replacing
Images and memories.
We hide because we see and misunderstand.
You are only who you are to me.
I am only what you’ve seen.
Not even shared memories
Are congruent painted concrete.
Yet your arm touched mine
And we both remained
No look exchanged
No expected disdain
No uncomfortable refrain
Only this
So intimate
An authentic moment
To justify
The rest.
Wrapped in skin and cellophane
Decorated cakes rising and falling,
Smoking candy cigarettes
In the crematorium.
But the words we choose
Are like surgical instruments
Picking, placing and replacing
Images and memories.
We hide because we see and misunderstand.
You are only who you are to me.
I am only what you’ve seen.
Not even shared memories
Are congruent painted concrete.
Yet your arm touched mine
And we both remained
No look exchanged
No expected disdain
No uncomfortable refrain
Only this
So intimate
An authentic moment
To justify
The rest.
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Re: The Rest
19th Sep 2013 1:40pm
Goodness!! How awesome your mind works lady, n how perfectly you spill ink from thoughts... I'm def. a fan! excellent stuff :?
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Re: The Rest
19th Sep 2013 2:24pm
" Smoking candy cigarettes
In the crematorium.
But the words we choose
Are like surgical instruments
Picking, placing and replacing
Images and memories.
We hide because we see and misunderstand "
excellent
wordery
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In the crematorium.
But the words we choose
Are like surgical instruments
Picking, placing and replacing
Images and memories.
We hide because we see and misunderstand "
excellent
wordery
+
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Re: The Rest
Anonymous
19th Sep 2013 2:37pm
Great imagery & expression. Wonderful poem. I enjoyed the read a lot. Welcome to DUP. :-)
Peace
Carlene
Peace
Carlene
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re: Re: The Rest
19th Sep 2013 2:50pm
Re: The Rest
Anonymous
19th Sep 2013 8:55pm
So true, the truth lies often in the moment (if it exists at all...) and moments are rare.
Some moments last forever....
Great one!
Some moments last forever....
Great one!
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Re: The Rest
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19th Sep 2013 10:34pm
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20th Sep 2013 7:41am
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15th Nov 2013 3:45pm
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Re: The Rest
9th Jan 2014 5:35am
starts with the rest and ends with the best-
"An authentic moment To justify The rest" - to make the few and far between moments of "real" near andmany is my daily non-meditation
"An authentic moment To justify The rest" - to make the few and far between moments of "real" near andmany is my daily non-meditation
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10th Jan 2014 3:34am