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He Drew Too
I knew a girl
Who liked to draw.
She drew pictures,
that no body saw.
She was more artistic,
alone at night.
Locked up in the bathroom
and out of site.
She didn't tell a soul,
and her gallery grew.
The art of this individual,
nobody knew.
Her drawings were different,
no pencil or pen.
She needed a bandage,
now and again.
She went on her first date,
under stars.
And by mistake, under her sleeves,
he saw her scars.
She felt so embarrassed,
her eyes, never met his,
she just stared at her shoe.
So he rolled up his sleeves,
just to show her that,
he drew too.[/font]
(Some one plagiarized my poem and placed it on Facebook as theirs.
I'm soo mad, but hey, I can't do anything about it.
So I'm just gonna place it here)
Published 18th Sep 2013
| Edited 11th Nov 2014
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18th Sep 2013 9:18am
This is a wonderfully sweet and captivating piece ... Tinged with a bit of sadness ...
Writer's note: S3 L1 should read "a soul" ...
I just don't get how people are so callous and disrespectful in stealing the work of others and posting it as their own. I know it must have hurt but in some strange ways it's a great compliment - maybe it even saved her
... in the end it just means you're an awesome writer.
LSP
Writer's note: S3 L1 should read "a soul" ...
I just don't get how people are so callous and disrespectful in stealing the work of others and posting it as their own. I know it must have hurt but in some strange ways it's a great compliment - maybe it even saved her
... in the end it just means you're an awesome writer.
LSP
18th Sep 2013 9:56am
Opps... lol.. thanks for the pointer. Fixed.
And thank You for the compliment.
I'm happy you enjoyed it.
I can only hope it actually did, or else that'll just make that person a fake
And thank You for the compliment.
I'm happy you enjoyed it.
I can only hope it actually did, or else that'll just make that person a fake
18th Sep 2013 10:03am
18th Sep 2013 10:05am
Anonymous
18th Sep 2013 4:22pm
This is a great write, sad, but so
creatively put...enjoyed!
creatively put...enjoyed!
18th Sep 2013 5:39pm
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20th Sep 2013 11:47pm
Anonymous
20th Sep 2013 11:49pm
This was a very sad poem but beautifully written.
I shall be adding this to my reading list.
I shall be adding this to my reading list.
21st Sep 2013 1:50am
Wow. Thank You!
I'm happy you liked.
Unfortunately, things like this happens.
I'm happy you liked.
Unfortunately, things like this happens.
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13th Oct 2013 10:32am
Damn, this really connected with me. Mine aren't terribly noticeable, but i've always thought i'll never need tattoos. Excellent poem and an excellent story
13th Oct 2013 10:49am
