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Come, just come...
Come with me
through the rosary
let's spend a lifetime in a day...
Come with me
be free of misery
battered soul's will disembark,
go far away...
let's dance to tunes our heart's play
make even the devil swoon in our special way...
Come with me
we two happy can be if we just see,
the sun's shine 'neath the gray
Come with me
how glorious it'd be
to spend a lifetime with you in a day...
through the rosary
let's spend a lifetime in a day...
Come with me
be free of misery
battered soul's will disembark,
go far away...
let's dance to tunes our heart's play
make even the devil swoon in our special way...
Come with me
we two happy can be if we just see,
the sun's shine 'neath the gray
Come with me
how glorious it'd be
to spend a lifetime with you in a day...
Published 17th Sep 2013
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17th Sep 2013 7:39pm
17th Sep 2013 8:04pm
Thank you, truly appreciate ur thoughts...
N I will return the favor soon :)
N I will return the favor soon :)
17th Sep 2013 7:47pm
Who wouldn't come with you, being told so lovely words? The first stanza I love most since I love roses so much. Beautiful poem, Poe!
17th Sep 2013 8:18pm
aaaaawwww that touched my heart! thank u my dear I really truly appreciate u n ur support always :)
Anonymous
- Edited 17th Sep 2013 7:59pm
17th Sep 2013 7:57pm
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17th Sep 2013 8:28pm
17th Sep 2013 8:39pm
Hmm... Living a lifetime in a day sounds like an ideal thing to do. You, my friend, are romantic :D
17th Sep 2013 8:43pm
Guilty as charged lol if there is one thing I will
Never deny it is that my heart, my mind dreams about sweet love always lol... Thank u so much my dear, I truly appreciate ur support :)
Never deny it is that my heart, my mind dreams about sweet love always lol... Thank u so much my dear, I truly appreciate ur support :)
17th Sep 2013 10:59pm
17th Sep 2013 11:01pm
18th Sep 2013 3:08am
Gosh darnit'! I'm on my wayyyyy!
Oh this is just gorgeous, Poet! Lovely lines, beautiful message! Love it! Xo
Oh this is just gorgeous, Poet! Lovely lines, beautiful message! Love it! Xo
18th Sep 2013 5:19am
Lmao ok, hurry baby!!hurry! lol
thank you so much for this big smile u left n for all your support i appreciate it n u always :)
thank you so much for this big smile u left n for all your support i appreciate it n u always :)
Anonymous
18th Sep 2013 4:42am
wow, with those words who wouldn't come running...lol
You're such a romantic Mr. PIKM :)
You're such a romantic Mr. PIKM :)
18th Sep 2013 5:21am
Thank you sweetie, yes I admit I'm a softy at times I guess lol
Truly grateful for all your support always my dear! :)
Truly grateful for all your support always my dear! :)
Anonymous
18th Sep 2013 3:48pm
So lovely and refreshing, words
that just make you smile and
be happy:)
that just make you smile and
be happy:)
18th Sep 2013 4:18pm
Aaaawwww u made me smile n be happy with ur sweet words!
Thank u so much my dear sweet friend... :)
Thank u so much my dear sweet friend... :)
