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Completed Death
My death is completed
As I watch you walk away
I fall to my knees and cry out in pain
I step under water
And as its heat sears my skin
My cries slowly halt
And my heart slowly stops
I become cold
Unattainable
Unreachable
I may smile
I may laugh
But from now on
There will be no true happiness
I watch you walk away
As I turn to stone
And from there I vow
To love no more
As I watch you walk away
I fall to my knees and cry out in pain
I step under water
And as its heat sears my skin
My cries slowly halt
And my heart slowly stops
I become cold
Unattainable
Unreachable
I may smile
I may laugh
But from now on
There will be no true happiness
I watch you walk away
As I turn to stone
And from there I vow
To love no more
Published 19th Sep 2009
| Edited 26th Nov 2012
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20th Sep 2009 12:20pm
26th Sep 2009 1:58am
I like the use of 'I step under water'.
Whatever the loss, it created a great little piece.
Whatever the loss, it created a great little piece.
9th Nov 2009 9:00pm
