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To my ex-love Catalina
In your confusion you injure
not on purpose
not with purpose
you lose the rythm
you lose the ryhme
but in time
you will see
your driven attitude
may buy you latitude
but your perfectionist soul
will take it's toll
on the weary
and the wary
for your special gift
for angry love
is lost in the chasm
of your lonely soul
lost but unknowing
you reject the love
given in haste
such waste
is forgiven
for a time
but again the rhyme
is lost
at great cost
you drive on
to you Catalina
I write
not with spite
but with love
that you are inside
so go..
and love
not on purpose
not with purpose
you lose the rythm
you lose the ryhme
but in time
you will see
your driven attitude
may buy you latitude
but your perfectionist soul
will take it's toll
on the weary
and the wary
for your special gift
for angry love
is lost in the chasm
of your lonely soul
lost but unknowing
you reject the love
given in haste
such waste
is forgiven
for a time
but again the rhyme
is lost
at great cost
you drive on
to you Catalina
I write
not with spite
but with love
that you are inside
so go..
and love
Published 2nd Jan 2011
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2nd Jan 2011 9:23am
Like it mate...like the roll. Nice mix-up wrap around of sounds...pretty ditty :-)
3rd Jan 2011 2:35am
Anonymous
10th Nov 2013 12:39pm
Spelling of Rhythm, lines 4 & 5- (R)hythm (H)elps (Y)our (T)wo (H)ips (M)ove
That little rhyme always helps me to remember how to spell it, thought I'd point this out here.
There is a lovely message here. Reminds me of the saying "if you love somebody, let it go".
Thank you for the read.
That little rhyme always helps me to remember how to spell it, thought I'd point this out here.
There is a lovely message here. Reminds me of the saying "if you love somebody, let it go".
Thank you for the read.
