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The Drink She Likes (Edited By Petit_Minou)
Sweet elixir she calls my juice
a taste she always loves
she smiles as she taps into the source
that she's been daydreaming of
No warning sometimes when she wants it
she targets the spot where the flow will come
jealous she is of every drop
won't stop licking until I am completely done
Devilish smile at the conclusion
she is so good at instigating my stream
better service than any health expert
reality so matches with the dream
But once is never the limit
the oil and lube make for variety in styles
moan I do in this nirvana
leaving a smile that can be seen for miles
a taste she always loves
she smiles as she taps into the source
that she's been daydreaming of
No warning sometimes when she wants it
she targets the spot where the flow will come
jealous she is of every drop
won't stop licking until I am completely done
Devilish smile at the conclusion
she is so good at instigating my stream
better service than any health expert
reality so matches with the dream
But once is never the limit
the oil and lube make for variety in styles
moan I do in this nirvana
leaving a smile that can be seen for miles
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Re: The Drink She Like (Edited By Petit_Minou)
Anonymous
13th Sep 2013 4:27pm
Nice write jazz manor and great editing pm....nirvana indeed
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13th Sep 2013 4:34pm
Re: The Drink She Likes (Edited By Petit_Minou)
13th Sep 2013 11:17pm
jealous she is of every drop
won't stop licking until I am completely done .. mmmmm this made me wanna lick my fingers. and very nice editing . i love it.
won't stop licking until I am completely done .. mmmmm this made me wanna lick my fingers. and very nice editing . i love it.
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re: Re: The Drink She Likes (Edited By Petit_Minou)
14th Sep 2013 2:59am
Re: The Drink She Likes (Edited By Petit_Minou)
Anonymous
14th Sep 2013 2:48am
Wow sizzling, very nice editing by Petit, good job!

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14th Sep 2013 3:00am
Re: The Drink She Likes (Edited By Petit_Minou)
14th Sep 2013 5:06am
Devilish smile at the conclusion
she is so good at instigating my stream
better service than any health expert
reality so matches with the dream
:) That's awesome delivery-Pen On Jazz!!!
she is so good at instigating my stream
better service than any health expert
reality so matches with the dream
:) That's awesome delivery-Pen On Jazz!!!
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re: Re: The Drink She Likes (Edited By Petit_Minou)
14th Sep 2013 7:18am
didn't even realize until your comment I had used the name of a fellow poet! Thanks for the read.
Re: The Drink She Likes (Edited By Petit_Minou)
JAZZ,My friend; Sat back with a glass of fine wine, and your work was the tasty treat that my mind did eat with my wine...Very nice experience, as started to imagine it myself, then realized that you succeeded in pulling me into your write... For some reason, the part that got me was " No warning sometimes when she wants it" that is what made this loving, an also intimate to me, Love Lust just washin over me... Right on man...deadwolf/ Eddie
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re: Re: The Drink She Likes (Edited By Petit_Minou)
14th Sep 2013 3:09pm
thanks, the original intent was to "disguise" the beverage. My hand had other ideas when it came to writing!
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15th Sep 2013 3:51am
Man my friend; isn't it something, never cease to find it amazing how my original idea for what am writing almost NEVER is written... Seems that soon as start to write, it is a different work than what was originally thought of in my head... How often that is, how often do you change your original idea, an come out with something in a different direction of what had in your head...
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15th Sep 2013 7:38am
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