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Scared
Love me?
Love me not?
Conditions?
Unconditionally?
Questions?
Answers?
Curious?
Scared?
Secrets?
Tell me...!!!
Tease me?
Fuck me!!!
P.G. 9/8/13
Love me not?
Conditions?
Unconditionally?
Questions?
Answers?
Curious?
Scared?
Secrets?
Tell me...!!!
Tease me?
Fuck me!!!
P.G. 9/8/13
Published 9th Sep 2013
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Anonymous
9th Sep 2013 9:36am
As I would appreciate any feedback
found for me the question marks were over loaded
leave in or take out hmm when this many i would opt for taking out well on each first line maybe leave in the marks on each last line
Love me
Love me not?
Conditions
Unconditionally?
Questions
Answers?
you get my drift :)
though its just my humble opinion :)
other than that this is a very well written poem with a kick ass ending
short sweet perfecto!
keep it up and oh welcome to dup xD
looka
leave in or take out hmm when this many i would opt for taking out well on each first line maybe leave in the marks on each last line
Love me
Love me not?
Conditions
Unconditionally?
Questions
Answers?
you get my drift :)
though its just my humble opinion :)
other than that this is a very well written poem with a kick ass ending
short sweet perfecto!
keep it up and oh welcome to dup xD
looka
16th Sep 2013 1:33am
Thanks got the feedback! I like the idea with the '?'...I thought about that angle...thanks again! I'll put out another poem soon!
