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Re: You
8th Sep 2013 5:17pm
What is solid now may not be
tomorrow. Everything changes,
volatility everywhere.
A solid poem, however.
tomorrow. Everything changes,
volatility everywhere.
A solid poem, however.
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re: Re: You
8th Sep 2013 5:48pm
Transiency, volatility,
perhaps that's why
people need something
to cling to, to believe in.
Solidity.
perhaps that's why
people need something
to cling to, to believe in.
Solidity.
Re: You
8th Sep 2013 5:22pm
re: Re: You
8th Sep 2013 5:49pm
Re: You
Anonymous
8th Sep 2013 9:07pm
Volatility is everywhere. Relatable write, Iris. Great description. Well done! :-)
Peace
Carlene
Peace
Carlene

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re: Re: You
8th Sep 2013 9:22pm
Thank you, Carlene! Volatility per se is not bad but if you want someone or something to stay, it's sad.
re: re: Re: You
Anonymous
8th Sep 2013 9:32pm
So true, Iris. I enjoy reading your insightful comments, too, my friend.
You have a gift of discernment in your interpretations/explanations! :-)
You have a gift of discernment in your interpretations/explanations! :-)

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re: re: re: Re: You
8th Sep 2013 9:42pm
I'm truely honored, Carlene! Thank you so much. I'm able to happily and fullheartedly return this compliment! And yes, when you're in your prime :-) you can fall back on experience gained in having lived a varied and rich life.
Re: You
8th Sep 2013 10:05pm
sounds like a party person. fun to dance with, but when the party's over, just say goodnight...
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re: Re: You
8th Sep 2013 10:10pm
Someone who loves to play and part ... yes. The 'bye' should immediately follow the 'hi' :-).
Re: You
8th Sep 2013 10:23pm
Some people leave
you wanting...this
poem wants for
nothing..nicely
done...)
you wanting...this
poem wants for
nothing..nicely
done...)
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re: Re: You
Re: You
Anonymous
9th Sep 2013 8:22pm
Chi, I know exactly the type of guy you write about...haha, arent they just darn charming despite of the outcome of things to be....

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re: Re: You
9th Sep 2013 8:36pm
They are, Liz, they are! You just have to keep hold of your heart and run as fast as you can. Thank you, dear, for your wise comment!
re: Re: You
10th Sep 2013 7:17pm