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sky and earth
The blue sky
does not lie
it is falling to be
grounded, with his long lost love,
earth.
for the children of earth and sky,
have grown into,
angry violent,vicious,
adolescents,
that spit a dirty attitude
betrayed,battered,exhausted
the earth mother fades,
and
sky will fall,
into the open core
of her heart,
to respark
her fire.
does not lie
it is falling to be
grounded, with his long lost love,
earth.
for the children of earth and sky,
have grown into,
angry violent,vicious,
adolescents,
that spit a dirty attitude
betrayed,battered,exhausted
the earth mother fades,
and
sky will fall,
into the open core
of her heart,
to respark
her fire.
Published 8th Sep 2013
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the opener and closer tie in well 2g which is always a good thing to keep a piece tightly gripped.
i would only suggest using different terms for sky rather than repeating the same word multipy x bein that it is in the title as well.
but i def dig it....
well done.
i would only suggest using different terms for sky rather than repeating the same word multipy x bein that it is in the title as well.
but i def dig it....
well done.
