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Hate
I hate you
For what you did to me
You took away my soul
I hate you
And I am glad you are dead
Shot in the head
I spit in your face
And scream at your corpse
Stomp on your head
Stomp on your dead head
It gives me pleasure
Disturbingly
I hate you
For what you did to me
For what you did to me
You took away my soul
I hate you
And I am glad you are dead
Shot in the head
I spit in your face
And scream at your corpse
Stomp on your head
Stomp on your dead head
It gives me pleasure
Disturbingly
I hate you
For what you did to me
Published 27th Dec 2010
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28th Dec 2010 00:17am
28th Dec 2010 4:42am
I can easily imagine this being sang as a death or thrash metal song! A lot of energy stored up and expressed through your poem. Having stopped to read it again, it sounds really good in my imagination as a death metal song!
