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Bumbling Mess
While you stumble
And try to stay normal
And I feel your heartbeat rise
Along with mine
In track with my smile
And try to stay normal
And I feel your heartbeat rise
Along with mine
In track with my smile
Published 30th Aug 2013
| Edited 31st Aug 2013
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Anonymous
30th Aug 2013 7:11pm
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31st Aug 2013 11:23pm
thank yo, I'm happy you like it
and I just noticed I swapped the two words but I already made that right :)
and I just noticed I swapped the two words but I already made that right :)
Anonymous
31st Aug 2013 1:31am
Short and sweet. Good read!
31st Aug 2013 11:22pm
31st Aug 2013 1:48am
31st Aug 2013 5:01am
I like a poem where every word counts:)
This is such a nice write (I know nice seems like a lame word) but I do mean nice in the nicest way
This is such a nice write (I know nice seems like a lame word) but I do mean nice in the nicest way
31st Aug 2013 11:21pm
Thank you
I do appreciate it to when poems are short but strong
and of course your comment too :)
I do appreciate it to when poems are short but strong
and of course your comment too :)
