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Childs Play
She stood in front of the door
Letting herself be seen,
Blinking until blurred vision
Became focused
She didn't speak a word
Stood in silence
Looking into the eyes of
A spirit
Before him was a young angel
Of beauty
Vanished in seconds she
Was gone
Light footsteps could be
Heard on the stairs
The sound of a child
Laughing
Echoed in toy filled
Bedrooms
A feeling of comfort came
Over him
Bringing peace to his
Heart
He knew right away his
Invisible girl
Was there with him in
The old house
Letting herself be seen,
Blinking until blurred vision
Became focused
She didn't speak a word
Stood in silence
Looking into the eyes of
A spirit
Before him was a young angel
Of beauty
Vanished in seconds she
Was gone
Light footsteps could be
Heard on the stairs
The sound of a child
Laughing
Echoed in toy filled
Bedrooms
A feeling of comfort came
Over him
Bringing peace to his
Heart
He knew right away his
Invisible girl
Was there with him in
The old house
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Re: Childs Play
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25th Aug 2013 9:27am
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25th Aug 2013 9:50am
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25th Aug 2013 9:58pm
I was going to title this "Haunting"...but didn't.
Thank you for reading GW! :)
Thank you for reading GW! :)
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26th Aug 2013 4:21am
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Anonymous
25th Aug 2013 11:50am
spooky and good tl...leaves one wondering
strider
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re: Re: Childs Play
25th Aug 2013 9:59pm
I guess this is what I get for buying an old house!
Thanks for reading strider ;)
Thanks for reading strider ;)
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25th Aug 2013 2:11pm
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25th Aug 2013 6:11pm
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25th Aug 2013 10:01pm
Re: Childs Play
25th Aug 2013 8:39pm
Thats wonderful. I wish the spirts in my life were pleasant as urs but anyways thanx for the good work
Keep em comein.
Keep em comein.
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re: Re: Childs Play
25th Aug 2013 10:02pm
The pleasant ones may be the ones to look for...thank you for reading Justin.
Re: Childs Play
25th Aug 2013 8:41pm
That down right gave me chills. Good write! Lil bit of spooky, lil bit of nice.
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re: Re: Childs Play
25th Aug 2013 10:04pm
Sitting alone in this big house can sometimes give me chills too...thanks MM.