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Sleeping Beauty
Sadness and unhappiness
overwhelm you
you feel as though you’re dying
and wish you could just fall asleep
to stop feeling so much
and never wake up
I wait helplessly so far away from you
my heart breaking as you slip away
If I could give you only one thing
it would be the ability to see yourself
through my eyes
Only then would you realize
how much you mean to me
overwhelm you
you feel as though you’re dying
and wish you could just fall asleep
to stop feeling so much
and never wake up
I wait helplessly so far away from you
my heart breaking as you slip away
If I could give you only one thing
it would be the ability to see yourself
through my eyes
Only then would you realize
how much you mean to me
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Re: Sleeping Beauty
Anonymous
23rd Aug 2013 4:46pm
This is so beautiful and loving! Great sensual write. :)
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Re: Sleeping Beauty
Anonymous
23rd Aug 2013 6:52pm
I very much enjoyed your beautiful poem...
Kitty
Kitty
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Re: Sleeping Beauty
23rd Aug 2013 7:31pm
It would be good to see
ourselves as those who
love us see us...I've always
wondered why they do...
ourselves as those who
love us see us...I've always
wondered why they do...
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re: Re: Sleeping Beauty
23rd Aug 2013 7:34pm
Re: Sleeping Beauty
Anonymous
23rd Aug 2013 7:48pm
sweet little write of love and yearning.....
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23rd Aug 2013 7:56pm
Re: Sleeping Beauty
Anonymous
23rd Aug 2013 8:33pm
This is very sweet and endearing,
a love letter of sorts:)
a love letter of sorts:)
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Re: Sleeping Beauty
23rd Aug 2013 8:46pm
O...My....Ummmm....(as breath catches in my throat!)
So sweetly sad, and hauntingly lovely!
I only hope that, the recipient knows what a priceless treasure you are...to be sure!
Transcribed with Touching Tenderness, my Friend. <3
So sweetly sad, and hauntingly lovely!
I only hope that, the recipient knows what a priceless treasure you are...to be sure!
Transcribed with Touching Tenderness, my Friend. <3
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23rd Aug 2013 8:57pm
Re: Sleeping Beauty
Anonymous
24th Aug 2013 6:54am
Sad how we see ourselves only through the bias of our own fears and pain. I hope you have cleared some of that from her vision with yours.
Beautifully penned.
Beautifully penned.
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24th Aug 2013 7:16pm
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24th Aug 2013 8:34pm
Re: Sleeping Beauty
Anonymous
25th Aug 2013 4:19pm
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re: Re: Sleeping Beauty
It takes one to know one. I am very
happy my words could move you.
As it turns out, this is her second
favorite poem of mine after
"The Sunflower and the Moon (2nd Edition)",
a woeful tale of unrequited love.
happy my words could move you.
As it turns out, this is her second
favorite poem of mine after
"The Sunflower and the Moon (2nd Edition)",
a woeful tale of unrequited love.
Re: Sleeping Beauty
28th Aug 2013 12:10pm
This is beautiful. I love how it shows that sometimes, one needs someone else to show them that they're important, and lovely.
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28th Aug 2013 1:36pm