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with such beauty
I envy you my beloved...
healer of my soul
ruler of my domain of peace
with such grace and yet chaind
in this confusion of you
been misused for all lust
and evil...
as my eyes bleed endlessly
without any means to stop
i see you suffocate each day
repeatedly as they rape the
Wisdom of your words...
but i see your sadness in
your face in shadows
surrounded by silence...
with such beauty I envy you.
healer of my soul
ruler of my domain of peace
with such grace and yet chaind
in this confusion of you
been misused for all lust
and evil...
as my eyes bleed endlessly
without any means to stop
i see you suffocate each day
repeatedly as they rape the
Wisdom of your words...
but i see your sadness in
your face in shadows
surrounded by silence...
with such beauty I envy you.
Published 22nd Aug 2013
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- Edited 22nd Aug 2013 00:56am
22nd Aug 2013 00:55am
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22nd Aug 2013 7:25pm
20th Feb 2014 6:49pm
Some nice emotion an descriptive phrases. Of, of / and , and / in, in / your, your... try and be more creative with your phrasing! Repetitive chain words can really kill the essence of your intent. Keep.grindin
