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Undeniable
Mementoes of him
branded on my skin
In remembrance of love
concealed over sin
and soft silks of no end,
devotion engraved
in yen tints of crimson
Inflame the absence of him,
pulsating within my chalice
escaping in criminal moans
embracing the air tightly
with dominating force
My Maestro's power,
patent amidst me.
branded on my skin
In remembrance of love
concealed over sin
and soft silks of no end,
devotion engraved
in yen tints of crimson
Inflame the absence of him,
pulsating within my chalice
escaping in criminal moans
embracing the air tightly
with dominating force
My Maestro's power,
patent amidst me.
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Re: Undeniable
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Aug 2013 9:40pm
21st Aug 2013 9:39pm
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re: Re: Undeniable
21st Aug 2013 10:17pm
A most generous comment you've shared so richly, Amanecio! Thank you for both, the reply and welcome!
Re: Undeniable
Anonymous
22nd Aug 2013 00:25am
Your first two poems show you may be new to DUP but not to poetry. Your poetry demonstrates
great potential.
Welcome to DUP NEW MEMBER
Write on!
Kitty
great potential.
Welcome to DUP NEW MEMBER
Write on!
Kitty
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re: Re: Undeniable
22nd Aug 2013 1:38am
A wonderful review you've given me, peacebe!
Thank you for the charitable words and welcome!
Thank you for the charitable words and welcome!
Re: Undeniable
I love your voice in this, amazing! Kitty is right your pen bleeds poetic.
G
G
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Re: Undeniable
Anonymous
23rd Aug 2013 8:28pm
Really beautiful...flowed
slowly, like deliberate to tease
the senses;) Welcome to DUP:)
slowly, like deliberate to tease
the senses;) Welcome to DUP:)
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Re: Undeniable
Anonymous
24th Aug 2013 7:18pm
I enjoyed this piece and look forward to more..welcome to DU :-)
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Anonymous
- Edited 9th Nov 2018 2:45pm
26th Aug 2013 8:07pm
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Re: Undeniable
28th Aug 2013 11:25pm