Bitter lie

your metaphor of "crashing cars" is an unusual comparison to this saddening affair;

I use the word "unusual" not as a degrading term but as a word that relates to uniqueness.

The juxtaposition was very interesting, and I look forward to reading your other submissions.

wow, thank you very much! I really appreciate your comment and the effort you've put into it :)

I like the way you have portrayed an important truth in this
"The truth hurts
But a lie is worse"
I also like the way this has capture the "essence" of leaving a partner
"I know it hurts
But I won’t take back these words"
"I won’t apologize
That I didn’t believe in lies"
"This is goodbye for you
But I just don’t love you"

I like how you have put reality into words.

thank you thank you!
Telling the truth is wat live's about in my opinion. Glad you liked it :)

You know I can relate to this poem in many ways and I find it quite captivating and beautiful the way you put this feeling into words, I quite enjoyed reading it.

thank you thank you for the kind words, again, glad you could relate to it and hope you had some support of it.

I think heartache is the most painful thing in the world, the one thing to make a grown man cry, even if it's my own doing, even when I know I can't live without her and that I'm gonna fold and take her back , the little time apart no matter how small is perfect misery. you are stronger than I, my love is rooted too deep, I've given my all, hopefully she won't make me pay for it.


        How does it feel to be so powerful?
           you're words so accurate that they
           bring the reader his/her own pain.


              thank you! even if you did scratch a raw wound.  Sabbath