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PEACE VIA PAIN !!!
Written for the competition "Pain to Peace"
The solitude and myself
kept walking hand in hand
the wounds were not ready to heal
my ruby lips always stitched and sealed.
Careless of what world speaks
Fed into the day night shrieks
Surprising scars with each new day
Pushing closer to the dark way.
Haunted dreams with scary screams
Unrevealing ecstasy it surely seems
The trials of love and pain attached
Its possibly impossible to detach.
Soon,when I tried playing with my shadow
Ray of light started peeping through the window
Confused, unsure, ignoring this act
Locked the room not knowing how to react.
Eventually started seeking soul with the last attempt
Taken aback, I successfully acknowledged thyself
Power of hope overcame the power of pain
Peaceful spirit was plastered in my heart and brain.
The solitude and myself
kept walking hand in hand
the wounds were not ready to heal
my ruby lips always stitched and sealed.
Careless of what world speaks
Fed into the day night shrieks
Surprising scars with each new day
Pushing closer to the dark way.
Haunted dreams with scary screams
Unrevealing ecstasy it surely seems
The trials of love and pain attached
Its possibly impossible to detach.
Soon,when I tried playing with my shadow
Ray of light started peeping through the window
Confused, unsure, ignoring this act
Locked the room not knowing how to react.
Eventually started seeking soul with the last attempt
Taken aback, I successfully acknowledged thyself
Power of hope overcame the power of pain
Peaceful spirit was plastered in my heart and brain.
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Re: PEACE VIA PAIN !!!
17th Aug 2013 11:45am
An excellent write Brinda, the last stanza wraps it up perfectly.
Love these two lines. :)
"Power of hope overcome the power of pain
Peaceful spirit was plastered in my heart and brain"
Love these two lines. :)
"Power of hope overcome the power of pain
Peaceful spirit was plastered in my heart and brain"
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17th Aug 2013 11:58am
Re: PEACE VIA PAIN !!!
17th Aug 2013 12:29pm
Love the flow of this, Brinda! Wonderful read!
Lots of luck and love with the comp. Xo
Lots of luck and love with the comp. Xo
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17th Aug 2013 1:22pm
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18th Aug 2013 11:46am
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Anonymous
18th Aug 2013 3:00am
nicely done brinda...good luck
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18th Aug 2013 11:47am
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Re: PEACE VIA PAIN !!!
20th Aug 2013 6:54am
The emphasis is always on communication with others but perhaps with this piece to some extent the importance of an internal communication shouldn't be overlooked.
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20th Aug 2013 9:42am
Yes internal communication is very important for a truce and acknowledgment of oneself.
Thanks for your views !
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20th Aug 2013 4:45pm
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Anonymous
14th Sep 2013 6:20am
Very good flow, and the message true to form, excellent scribe.
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14th Sep 2013 6:36am
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14th Oct 2013 11:25am
Excellent... I definitely feel the flow from pain to peace and vice-versa!
Well Done!
Darker
Well Done!
Darker
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14th Oct 2013 12:59pm