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to start the day
The quiet of the dawn
unbroken but for the sound
Of your breathing
I am content to listen
watching the first light
Of day
Make its way across the bed
To caress your face
The peace I see in your features
Is reflected on my soul
The weight of your arm
Across my stomach, a welcome warmth
The naked expanse of your back
A sight I never tire of
Your head on my chest
A good way
To start the day
unbroken but for the sound
Of your breathing
I am content to listen
watching the first light
Of day
Make its way across the bed
To caress your face
The peace I see in your features
Is reflected on my soul
The weight of your arm
Across my stomach, a welcome warmth
The naked expanse of your back
A sight I never tire of
Your head on my chest
A good way
To start the day
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16th Aug 2013 12:40pm
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16th Aug 2013 3:54pm
I can't wait to start my day like this again..someday :) It's beautiful.
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16th Aug 2013 6:19pm
I like this a lot. I was able to feel what you wrote and it brought greater satisfaction of my own wife and . Thank you
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16th Aug 2013 7:35pm
I do feel incredibly lucky every day I get to wake up with her. Thank you for liking it.
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23rd Jul 2014 4:25pm
I love starting my day like this with my fiancé. What a beautiful poem you have written :)
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