Mistake

I totally agree! I have always thought there was something missing with this one. I mean, I never edited it, because it made sense in my head when I wrote it, and still does, but I try to look at my poems from a different perspective, and I find that this one can be confusing. Your opinion is appreciated, although, I am not a fan of editing my poetry, but I will try to re write it in a different format for a third vision. :)

I understand it completely as written. I get the feeling that two people adore then over time one then finds faults and attempts to change the other as people tend to do, only to create a person that isn't "me". Let , Let, let me through..A plea to except not change.  Bravo!