Grave Mind

Good write :) I kinda feel like it could keep going though xD anyways, I liked it. Do you write poems that don't rhyme, or do you just tend to rhyme (just curious)

Haha Thanks, I used to write super long ones so tried to just do the opposite a few times. I've written a couple of non rhyming ones, experimenting a bit. It was so hard for me to do because I find rhyming much more fun but I do want to challenge myself to doing it again in the future, thanks for stopping by.

Simplicity can be powerful, eh?! Nice! Xo

Yesh it can, thanks missy appreciate it.

Kinda time's running, we are changing philosophy:)

Tight lines, like it much, Ghos!

thanks a lot dude I appreciate it big time!

I enjoyed this. I do agree with Queen of Angels in that it could go a bit further.  I'd definitely come back to read it.

thanks, means a lot. Yeah, I hear ya. The thought was just to try say a lot with as little words as possible. I'm sure I will touch on the subject In the future though.