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True blue music lovers
You're not the radio demographic
You're not the shallow pool of humanity
You heard that song as a demo
Before the producer
Told them to remove the word "fuck"
Four weeks ago when
they announced the tour dates
You bought those tickets in advance
And went alone
Because you're friends
would've just talked over
the whole fucking thing
And you wanted to get into it
You hang by the soundboard first
Hoping they don't bury the kick in the mix
Scanning looking for
every lyric mouthed people
(the top echelon of music lovers)
Then the energy towards the front draws you in
And you assume the responsibility
Letting the music move you
So the band loses themselves
And you share
At that moment in time
The most intoxicating bliss
That confirms within every fiber of your being
You are alive
Just saw Crash Kings/Nico Vega in Chicago this was needed by me.
You're not the shallow pool of humanity
You heard that song as a demo
Before the producer
Told them to remove the word "fuck"
Four weeks ago when
they announced the tour dates
You bought those tickets in advance
And went alone
Because you're friends
would've just talked over
the whole fucking thing
And you wanted to get into it
You hang by the soundboard first
Hoping they don't bury the kick in the mix
Scanning looking for
every lyric mouthed people
(the top echelon of music lovers)
Then the energy towards the front draws you in
And you assume the responsibility
Letting the music move you
So the band loses themselves
And you share
At that moment in time
The most intoxicating bliss
That confirms within every fiber of your being
You are alive
Just saw Crash Kings/Nico Vega in Chicago this was needed by me.
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Re: True blue music lovers
Anonymous
11th Aug 2013 4:50am
Sounds like an awesome time. Hope you had fun. Enjoyed the story. :)
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11th Aug 2013 5:11am
Yes I did have fun. A celebration in someway. My daughter agreed to seek help for her depression. I went alone and met music lovers.
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Anonymous
11th Aug 2013 7:16am
Very very cool! I'm so happy for the good news. Yippie!!! :)
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11th Aug 2013 1:36pm
Re: True blue music lovers
11th Aug 2013 11:56am
Wow can feel the music...love going to concerts by myself,it lets me be free...very nice write.
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11th Aug 2013 1:34pm
I went to lollapalooza three years ago by myself. Thanks for stopping by my fellow music lover.
Re: True blue music lovers
11th Aug 2013 8:07pm
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11th Aug 2013 11:37pm
Thank you so much. It's always a gamble seeing a live band but,the rewards can be life-affirming.
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11th Aug 2013 9:19pm
Re: True blue music lovers
11th Aug 2013 11:39pm
Thank you.Is there a band that you could go see and sing every lyric every song ?
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13th Aug 2013 5:32am
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Anonymous
24th Aug 2013 7:09pm
awesome! I felt you and the passion for real music throughout..:-) write on!
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18th Dec 2013 2:59am
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