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This guy - Explicit
There's this guy
Yeah My Guy
He's my drug
He makes me high
His touch intoxicates me
Kisses put me over the legal limit
He got me sprung
I'm not even ashamed to admit it
Truth be told
I been fucked up
Since the first night he hit it
I'd change my last name to his
Right this very minute
I'd love to be his wife
Only his
All his
For the rest of my life
I'd never cheat on him
There'd be nothing to consider
He's all I've ever wanted
There's nothing else I would need
So technically I can't be his
On paper we'll never be Mr & Mrs
But Definitely marriage materiel
Like the old fashioned type
Your first becomes your last
Yeah me and this guy
Have definitely got a past
There's not much of my history
Where he isn't in it
First love
True love
Real love
Fairy tale love
He's my soulmate
And he's crazy if he can't see
He already owns me
Mind body and soul
He Showed me how sex is supposed to feel
No bullshit
No games
My guy is for real
Sensations I never knew could exist
Knows exactly the right spots
To touch lick and kiss
OMG the experience is absolute bliss
He turns me on in every single way
Foreplay
Insane
Always has me begging for more
Multiple orgasms
Oh yes! For sure
Trembling shaking can't feel my legs
He ignores the pleas
Just give me a minute I beg
Not letting up
He's owning me
Takes his time
Knows just what I like
Doesn't have to rush
He's turned on too
Pleasing and teasing me
He loves to give just as much
Loves how he can make my body tremble
With just the slightest touch
Whispers in my ear
Sends chills down my spine
Thinking to himself
Yeah this pussy is mine
Begging to feel him
Want him buried deep inside
He knows what he's doing
Still taking his time
Licking
Sucking
Faster
Slower
Harder
Makes me scream out
Baby please
Right to the edge
I'm hanging feel like I can't take it
Stops
Positions himself on top of me
Kisses me
Deeply
Passionately
Thrust his hips
I cry out
His thick long dick feels my pussy
It's more than I can take
Immediately my body starts to shake
I can feel the wave start to build
My body is his
He's controlling it
Every nerve in my body fully alert
He can sense my body tense
Knows I'm holding back
He knows just what he's doing
And he picks up the pace
Faster
Harder
Knows exactly what it takes
Whispers in my ear
Knowing I cant hold back any longer
I want the pleasure of this release
In my ear I hear
Yes baby cum on your dick baby
My pussy grips his dick
As my body explodes
I start to squirt
This he loves to see
Yes baby god yes he says
Squirt your pussy juices all over me
I'm obeying tho I've lost control
Juices streaming from my pussy
Like a water hose
Except there's no off switch
Once it starts
I can't make it stop
Just keeps on and on
And so does he
Its covers his chest
And soaks the bed
I lose all train of thought
Lost in ecstasy
He knows exactly wtf he's doing to me
I buck, try to run
But he holds me down
Uh uh he says
That was just the first round
Thrust his hips
Feels my pussy again
Slowly at first
Then he starts to speed up
My nails dig into his back
I throw my head back and scream out his name
I'm gone
In a zone
Can't even maintain
My body convulses
And I lose control again
Feeling so good
Never wanting it to end
The most incredible fantasy
But no fantasy it's happening, it's real
Wanna stay in this moment
This high that I'm on
He's made me his addict
Cuz I've just gotta have it
Anytime
Any place
Any position
I'm with it
Pleasing my guy is my only mission
True love slave
Do as I'm told
He can have whatever he wants
Fast or slow
Hard or soft
I can be gentle
Or I can get rough
Today, tomorrow, next week
It's whenever, forever
There's no way i could ever, ever get enough
No rehab for me
For my addiction
He's the only cure
Of this I am absolutely sure
And if you say
You've never experienced this stuff
I must be crazy
Or I'm making it up
My only response to that is this
Me and my baby
We know what's up
We know everything sex is about
And I feel sorry for you
Cuz you're totally missing out
Yeah My Guy
He's my drug
He makes me high
His touch intoxicates me
Kisses put me over the legal limit
He got me sprung
I'm not even ashamed to admit it
Truth be told
I been fucked up
Since the first night he hit it
I'd change my last name to his
Right this very minute
I'd love to be his wife
Only his
All his
For the rest of my life
I'd never cheat on him
There'd be nothing to consider
He's all I've ever wanted
There's nothing else I would need
So technically I can't be his
On paper we'll never be Mr & Mrs
But Definitely marriage materiel
Like the old fashioned type
Your first becomes your last
Yeah me and this guy
Have definitely got a past
There's not much of my history
Where he isn't in it
First love
True love
Real love
Fairy tale love
He's my soulmate
And he's crazy if he can't see
He already owns me
Mind body and soul
He Showed me how sex is supposed to feel
No bullshit
No games
My guy is for real
Sensations I never knew could exist
Knows exactly the right spots
To touch lick and kiss
OMG the experience is absolute bliss
He turns me on in every single way
Foreplay
Insane
Always has me begging for more
Multiple orgasms
Oh yes! For sure
Trembling shaking can't feel my legs
He ignores the pleas
Just give me a minute I beg
Not letting up
He's owning me
Takes his time
Knows just what I like
Doesn't have to rush
He's turned on too
Pleasing and teasing me
He loves to give just as much
Loves how he can make my body tremble
With just the slightest touch
Whispers in my ear
Sends chills down my spine
Thinking to himself
Yeah this pussy is mine
Begging to feel him
Want him buried deep inside
He knows what he's doing
Still taking his time
Licking
Sucking
Faster
Slower
Harder
Makes me scream out
Baby please
Right to the edge
I'm hanging feel like I can't take it
Stops
Positions himself on top of me
Kisses me
Deeply
Passionately
Thrust his hips
I cry out
His thick long dick feels my pussy
It's more than I can take
Immediately my body starts to shake
I can feel the wave start to build
My body is his
He's controlling it
Every nerve in my body fully alert
He can sense my body tense
Knows I'm holding back
He knows just what he's doing
And he picks up the pace
Faster
Harder
Knows exactly what it takes
Whispers in my ear
Knowing I cant hold back any longer
I want the pleasure of this release
In my ear I hear
Yes baby cum on your dick baby
My pussy grips his dick
As my body explodes
I start to squirt
This he loves to see
Yes baby god yes he says
Squirt your pussy juices all over me
I'm obeying tho I've lost control
Juices streaming from my pussy
Like a water hose
Except there's no off switch
Once it starts
I can't make it stop
Just keeps on and on
And so does he
Its covers his chest
And soaks the bed
I lose all train of thought
Lost in ecstasy
He knows exactly wtf he's doing to me
I buck, try to run
But he holds me down
Uh uh he says
That was just the first round
Thrust his hips
Feels my pussy again
Slowly at first
Then he starts to speed up
My nails dig into his back
I throw my head back and scream out his name
I'm gone
In a zone
Can't even maintain
My body convulses
And I lose control again
Feeling so good
Never wanting it to end
The most incredible fantasy
But no fantasy it's happening, it's real
Wanna stay in this moment
This high that I'm on
He's made me his addict
Cuz I've just gotta have it
Anytime
Any place
Any position
I'm with it
Pleasing my guy is my only mission
True love slave
Do as I'm told
He can have whatever he wants
Fast or slow
Hard or soft
I can be gentle
Or I can get rough
Today, tomorrow, next week
It's whenever, forever
There's no way i could ever, ever get enough
No rehab for me
For my addiction
He's the only cure
Of this I am absolutely sure
And if you say
You've never experienced this stuff
I must be crazy
Or I'm making it up
My only response to that is this
Me and my baby
We know what's up
We know everything sex is about
And I feel sorry for you
Cuz you're totally missing out
Published 10th Aug 2013
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As an account of a sexual encounter this is good . . . .just asit happens;however read through again and see whether you can develope a rhythm in your writing try free verse which will give you freedom of expression, rather than a strict meter and need to rhyme. Read others' poetry especially the classical writers . .Shakespeare ideal his poetry is deep full of illusion and allusion at times quite 'naughty'Writing erotic poetry is not as easy as at first it appears remember a poem is not a sex manual much of what you are depicting is well known to most readers your job is to build up an atmosphere over and above fucking. I think you will soon develope a style . . .don't write too much erotica.... try other subjects.Good luck.
As an account of a sexual encounter this is good . . . .just asit happens;however read through again and see whether you can develope a rhythm in your writing try free verse which will give you freedom of expression, rather than a strict meter and need to rhyme. Read others' poetry especially the classical writers . .Shakespeare ideal his poetry is deep full of illusion and allusion at times quite 'naughty'Writing erotic poetry is not as easy as at first it appears remember a poem is not a sex manual much of what you are depicting is well known to most readers your job is to build up an atmosphere over and above fucking. I think you will soon develope a style . . .don't write too much erotica.... try other subjects.Good luck.
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