Unfinished Poem

I started this poem the other day, but only got this far.
I stared at it for a good half an hour earlier, but couldn't think of what I wanted to add...

I know there was something, but my mind just went blank. :(

I think it's pretty good how it is but if you really wanna add to it, try reworking it without the rhyme and see if that leads anywhere? Is the Kansas reference intentional or accidental btw?

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It's not so much that I want to add more, as it is about my annoyance at completely forgetting what I was writing.
And it was an accident.

I think it's actually genius...u know if u just allow
the creative juices to just flow u could be very surprised at what comes out... :)

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I feel like this sometimes also, this piece is drenched in darkness, beautiful.

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This gripping and dark.  I can't wait to read the rest of it it.
The words will find you.

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its definitely dark .. kinda looks like a suicide note to me... especially the abyss line.. all in all its a very interesting piece .. waiting for u to complete it .. keep writing..


cyanide....

Thanks~